Thank you so much! It was really hard to stick to Neo-Twiny Jam's 500 word limit (not including the code) especially when I wanted to keep describing the atmosphere, so I'm really glad to hear my writing was effective. <3
"Wine dark sea" mention~ I love how you draw attention to the depth of the love these women have for each other in contrast to the objective love of that man, highlighting the admiration beyond just a representation of the body but also a desire for the heart & person beneath skin like stone <3
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This was so beautiful and lovely. To be adored by the one you love is wonderful!
It is! Thank you so much for your engagement. I'm so glad you enjoyed Amber & Myrrh.
The writing is beautiful and the atmosphere is like no other!
Thank you so much! It was really hard to stick to Neo-Twiny Jam's 500 word limit (not including the code) especially when I wanted to keep describing the atmosphere, so I'm really glad to hear my writing was effective. <3
Beautifully written! I enjoyed the idea of the tapestry: how craft can show patience, devotion, and love. And the end was very sweet <3
Thank you!
"Wine dark sea" mention~ I love how you draw attention to the depth of the love these women have for each other in contrast to the objective love of that man, highlighting the admiration beyond just a representation of the body but also a desire for the heart & person beneath skin like stone <3
Thank you! I appreciate your engagement with Amber & Myrrh.